With a paper in my hand and pen in my mouth
I am sitting and wondering what all should i write about?
about the world,politics,relations or love?
or god who is there all above?
hmmm...yup!i know what i wanna write about....
it's 'ME' my aims n my life that is SO full of doubts!
to begin with,My dear friends....
i am a dreamer who wants to set the trends.
talking about my dreams and my life,well i have two sides:-
one is like any other girl's
a lover(beau),a baby....a simple life,
a nice job so that i can survive.
but then suddenly something in me gets up and clarifies....
that NOOOO.....I am not satisfied!
not that 9 to 9 job for me to accomplish
no shackles of relationships
a famous star for the world to know,
around the world i want to go!!
an adventurous life, around the world...
with animals,trees and playing with nature.
spending nights near the sea
admiring the natures beauty.
violins music all around
wow!!no tension of family waiting out!
hmmmmm...that's me 'the dreamer'
Once a friend of mine called me 'confused'!!
and i questioned him back"confused"??????
now i realize that he was right!
i don't know where i have to go...left or right?????
the thought process is still going on ......
when i am clear with myself....i shall revert back to you all!
7 comments:
Wow!!!!!u have done a gr8 job.....
its really tough to understand who i m ??????
u had expressed ur views in a very lucid and innocent language.......hope to read more frm ur side soon.....last i would like to add ..Happiness is
not having what you want,
but wanting what
you have
cute post jo. he,he. keep writing. i'm glad u took the plunge !!
self analysis is a very good thing... i think everyone should do it once in a while, & u'll surprised with the results of it each time... it'll change 4m time 2 time. as life goes on we as human beings change with our surroundings while trying 2 adapt 2 it, but there are some basic elements inside us which rarely changes. these are the so-called "desires" of our materialistic life. once u achieve that, u'll hav 2 do a self-analysis again... & the process continues.
a nice post 4m a very genuinely good-at-heart person. after reading this blog i hav 2 say "ye dil mange more".
P.S.: am i the guy who called u "confused"? :)
thanx....to all the readers....n thanx 4 all ur encouragement!:)m glad dat i have u all.....ur support will take me a long way!!!:)....n yes debankar.....heheeh...u r d one who called me confused!!!
hey dear i was not aware of your writing skills.such a meaningful poem....it was gr88 ....sweety keep n writing...
well, first up....the colored words are totally unnecessary .
the concept is nice , but most situations u've presented are out of tune .
"with animals,trees and playing with nature." - redundant language .
"admiring the natures beauty.
violins music all around " ---- too filmy :) .... cute, but cliched .
anyways , nice to see that one more person has started writing....keep at it girl .
Keep writing
cheers
hello girl amazing thoughts ... 1st blog so nt analysing it ...... but i wanna say that it was direct dil se ...........liked it ........
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